Few small changes and feedback...
> "Who's the daddy?" instead of "Who's the father?" because the terms more memorable and widely known.
> Also adapting the headlines, because there simple and abupt "Killer" doesn't indicate which soap supports the photo, so it doesn't appeal to buyers.
> From feedback, Mark Hartshorn from Miles Smith
" I don't actually specialise in this kind of thing but my only thoughts would be that nearly all TV magazines look very very similar. Yours is no exception. I had one of my colleges look at your work and he was impressed, I quote " It very well presented with a good use of pictures and typefaces. However do you think it will stand out from the crowd though?
Red and Yellow seem to feature heavily on these magazines. Perhaps introducing a different main colour theme would be an idea?
Its not always the title you search for when you look for your magazine of choice. Sometimes it is just as easy to identify through colour and / or size.
The content is great, it's what people want to see and read. Although attracting new buyers to it requires it to stand out from the crowd.
Its Monday and i'm recovering from my sisters best friends wedding on Saturday, here there is a picture of the beautiful bride alongside her brother. Another photo of Tony is below, the friday before all the guests went out to a bar in the city. Had a great weekend and Rebeecca is happy with the photos. Meanwhile she focused on the KILLER headline and took some great shots of a family friend. These are all shown below.
I was thinking it would be ok to use to the same person in two shots as were planning to put them at opposite ends of the magazine. Its just there great shots which match well the headlines we have planned.
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