Tuesday 22 December 2009

Action plan

* Opening Shot of a South Eastern train, Rebecca walking alongside the train to carrying holdalls (over-night bag,) showing the audience shes back from a long trip.

* In the next shot, Rebecca narrates to the camera, set against a black background.
During the monologue she explains the storyline, while emotionally setting up why she has come back we are using Rebecca to narrate the story setting her on a blank background, alike a confessions box this will make the her the adamant character in the trailer.

*Next will be the flash backs, the idea is to edit all the shots in Premiere of the "dates" into a collage, or to spilt the screen so the audience can make clear differences in the two boys since their hair and skin colour are similar and they could be confused as the same person. Although Rebecca suggested slowing down the clips using Premiere, to distinct the two prospective fathers.

* Flash back of 6 months ago, shows her dating two boys. Tom playing a "chavvy" young boy, who cant afford to take Rebecca to expensive places, although her believes shes worth every penny. There feelings aren't pretence and he believes them to be sole mates. Its evident from the footage they have great chemistry.

Meanwhile Rebecca being an attractive girl, although taken. Couldn't control her feelings for Simon, fully aware of his well-known "player" reputation. His swagger and bad status enticed young Rebecca. After a series of sly dates he takes her to dine in the country and after too much wine and a great night, he buys a room for them to stay in for the night.
She leaves him as he falls for her, but to clear her head although her feelings are strong she's mature enough to realise what she's getting herself into.

* The voice over/ image of Rebecca returns as she gets around to express to the boys her feelings and her "life changing" news.

* Another flash back of her pregnancy test results, she throws it into the sink in disbelief then begins to weep hysterically.